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“Welcome, and thank you all for being here at the kickoff of the 2050 Anna Harris Live Unspoken Tour.” Anna was backstage crying. This was her first big concert and 25,000 people were standing in the arena waiting to see her. She felt alone again. After her parents and sister died, all she had done was sing and post a few videos on Youtube. Now, everybody called her “the only thing better than that Justin Bieber kid.”
Anna Harris jumped on the platform, and started rising up and forced a smile. She finally reached the stage and saw fireworks above and dry ice surrounding her. The crowd went wild. The music started playing. Anna froze.
Article posted October 7, 2011 at 08:07 AM •
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It was a little depressing-but the story is very realistic of how you can get stage fright.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 09:11 AM by
RS


What a great start! It kept me interested i didn't want to stop reading it.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 09:05 AM by
BR7


What a great start! It kept me interested i didn't want to stop reading it.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 09:05 AM by
BR7


What a great start! It kept me interested i didn't want to stop reading it.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 09:03 AM by
BR7


O my gosh!!!!! That was one of the best stories I've ever read!!! I wished you would write more. You got me hooked by the first sentence. I don't really think there is anything wrong with it except it was just a tiny bit choppy at some parts.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 08:24 AM by
JA


O my gosh!!!!! That was one of the best stories I've ever read!!! I wished you would write more. You got me hooked by the first sentence. I don't really think there is anything wrong with it except it was just a tiny bit choppy at some parts.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 08:24 AM by
JA


I love how dramatic the your story is. I don't like how it ends there though.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 08:19 AM by
GH6


It was great but try to come up with your own original websites and things.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 08:15 AM by
TS


O my gosh!!!!! That was one of the best stories I've ever read!!! I wished you would write more. You got me hooked by the first sentence. I don't really think there is anything wrong with it except it was just a tiny bit choppy at some parts.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 08:14 AM by
JA

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