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My favorite story was "Charles" for a number of different reasons. First, it was entertaining. I was always thinking about what was happening and what it was leading up to. Secondly, it was short and fast with no pointless pages. this helped keep my attention all the time. Finally, it had a lot of the traits of the good story which kept me hooked. For all these reasons and even some more that aren't here , I enjoyed this story.
Article posted October 5, 2011 at 11:25 AM •
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Wow! That is what I think too!!I really like this! Just use better transitions and you are good to go! ;)
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