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 My Favorite Story To kick off, the story "charles" was entertaining, because of the little boy named Laurie. He was almost always doing something that would attract attention. For example, he was coming home from school one day, slammed the door behind him, and was yelling. Second, this story was funny because Laurie's parents were always trying to figure out who this bad-boy Charles is, when it is really just Laurie! Furthermore, this story has a good lesson. 'Your children should never lie. Especially when the lie is about themselves.' As you can see, I love the story "Charles because of all the fun and exciting parts to it. Article posted October 2, 2011 at 01:49 PM • comment (1) • Reads 67 • Return to Blog List Add a CommentPosted Comments  Hey Ahslyn! I think this paragraph is really good! Your transitions are really good and I like how you used good words, like when you said slammed you could have said shut so I thought that was awesome. Make sure to check your puncuation better next time. (:
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