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I think the alien's should have been introduced right before Isadora and Dr.Shumway.In my opinion it would have kept more readers interested instead of having to wait like four chapters for it.
Article posted September 29, 2011 at 03:00 PM •
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i don't understand your comment.
Comment Posted on October 20, 2011 at 02:48 PM by
I think it was in a perfect spot in the story.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 04:33 PM by
could you explain more. Why would it keep more readers interested
Comment Posted on October 6, 2011 at 03:06 PM by
I like your reasoning but jack did see the aliens before Isadora and Dr.Shumway
Comment Posted on October 3, 2011 at 04:43 PM by