I think the author is doing good because he's described the characters really good.Except for commander Xaafunn I think he should have told more about commander Xaafunn.Also I think Dr.Shumway is commander Xaafunn because they act the same way.
Article posted September 29, 2011 at 03:00 PM •
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I think they should be described more so you know where they came from.How they were made.
Comment Posted on October 3, 2011 at 04:33 PM by
Good job describing why you think Dr.Shumway is Commander Xaafuun.
Comment Posted on September 29, 2011 at 03:07 PM by
Junie B. Jones
Why do you think that that they should be described more
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