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Greeneyes Story- Part Two
By then, I was an apprentice. I was known as Greenpaw, and my mentor was Dawnlight. I was a proud she-cat. Maybe too proud, but hey, I was young and reckless. Turns out, I really liked Adderkit-now Adderpaw- alot. He was just so handsome, with his long black fur... Oh great, I'm getting off topic. Oh well... Getting back to the story... About a moon later, The foxes raided MapleClan's camp, also with CedarClan's and WillowClan's. We were frightened of everything. We decided to fight. We stormed the foxes' camp and fought. Was I cocky! When the foxes lunged into battle, all I heard was the pounding of blood in my ears as a fox barrled into me. Angered, I bit down hard on a fox's leg and it barked and growled, lashing to get me off. I held fast, however, until I saw Larksong go down in a flurry of teeth and blood. I yowled angrily and let go, and dragged Larksong out of the heat of battle. She was limp. She felt too limp. I was worried, but then I felt her breathing, but it was slight. I held back tears. "Don't die," I begged softly around her scruff "don't die." When the medicine cat was taking care of her, I ran back into the fight. A few minutes later I was half dead, loosing blood. Fast. I had managed to take out the leader, but that was about it. I recovered for many days, and soon, I found out about... The... Secret. This horrifying secret I never told anyone before. This is what life is!
Article posted September 13, 2011 at 10:06 AM •
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I like the detail in this, but it might need a little more to it to make it a little more interesting. otherwise it's really good. I am really interested in seeing what the secret is.
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