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My story starts when I was born. I was born on February 12, 2000 at 4 a.m. I grew up in Atlanta, GA. But moved to Buffalo. NY when I was about 6 months. I moved to New York because my dad played football in the NFL. He was #20 for the Buffalo Bills. In New York, I had a best friend. Her name was Paris Green. We enjoyed playing in her backyard together. Now, I enjoy dancing and hanging out with my friends. I am friends with lots of people. One of my best friends is Crystal Childs. We have known each other since I moved to Georgia. She doesn’t go to GAC anymore but we keep in touch. My story is me growing up in Atlanta, Georgia and going to my aunt’s farm. On that farm we have horses, a pig, and cats. I ride a big chestnut rone mare named, Blaze. She is one of our tallest mares. We resently had our oldest mare give birth to a small horse named Hope-Harriet- Hannah. (We have not chosen a name yet.) We also got fishing and hiking. More of my story is running. I run track. I ran track with the Jackrabbits. I ran track with the Jackrabbit track and field club. Mt story is sitting in honors language arts and writeing.
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I think it is cool that you stay in touch with your friend. The only thing you could improve is the spelling of "writing".
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 12:46 PM by
RW7


I think it is cool that you stay in touch with your friend. The only thing you could improve is the spelling of "writing".
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 12:46 PM by
RW7


Hey JJ, I really like how you started your story with when you were born and all of the details. Jada, you gave a lot of description. I think that you could've put a couple things about Crystal.
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 12:45 PM by
BR7


Job job, Jada!! You did awesome on your writing. Just make sure you double-check, and you'll do great!
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 12:43 PM by
AB7


HI JJ
You did a really good job. I really liked how you included so much but next time I would check your spelling a little more.
Thanks
KL
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 12:42 PM by
KL7


Great story JJ! you gave lots of details. the only thing i have to add is that your sentences were a little short.
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 12:42 PM by
BR7


I love your story! I bet it was cool that your dad was in the NFL!
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 12:41 PM by
EC7

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