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My story is traumatizing. This story happened when I was at the age of four. It was just a regular weekend day. My older sister was watching “Dragon Tails” on a Sunday afternoon, and I was being my ole’ crazy self. I was jumping, yelling, crawling, and literally bouncing off the walls. At one point, I decided to have a lot more fun, and pretend to be superman on the top of the couch. Well that didn’t come out the way I wanted it to. After a while, I went over the top of the couch and fell off the couch. As I was falling to the ground, I tried to grab the couch and pull myself up, but I didn’t, and I broke my left arm. When I looked down at my arm, it reminded me of a rollercoaster. My body weight had broken my arm and crunched my forearm to a dent. It looked like a loop!
Article posted September 9, 2011 at 09:00 AM •
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I liked story ver much. I thought that you had lots of detail and told story perfectly. I also liked how you added about how you were acting like a little kid.
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 06:03 PM by
Great job on your blog BR! I like how told about the stuff you did as a little kid to lead up to the climax, but you could improve just a little on one thing try to write only the things that matter to the story
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