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My Story
My story is how I took the Band-Aid off my brother’s foot when he was born. When he was first born, he had needed a shot on his heel, because he was having difficult time breathing. The shot had made it bleed, so the doctors put a Band-Aid on his foot. I was very little, and I loved my brother, even though he was just a baby. I wanted to see for myself if his foot was okay, so I took off his sock, and then the Band-Aid and I looked. It had stopped bleeding, and the hole was so tiny, (you know how shots are) that I could not see it. I determined him fine. Then I went home, leaving his sock next to him. I could not wait to see him again, and we went back to the hospital the next day. Most often, when you are a toddler, and you get a baby brother/sister, after a while, you say to your mom, “Okay, Mommy, you can put him back now,” because you are a toddler and you cannot fully comprehend the world, so you think that since it was in the Mommy it can go back in the Mommy. My mom says that “I was never like that, I was just helpful.” I love my brother, and I always will.
Article posted September 9, 2011 at 08:17 AM •
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Wow, AB! Your story was awesome! I really like that you chose a story so unique. I think that your story still needed a few more details, though (although I really like what you have now). I thought it was really good.
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 12:41 PM by
LH7


I thought your post was sooooo sweet. You are so right about what normal toddlers do. I would like to know more though, like what did your mom say when she saw that the band-aid was gone, or what was your brother like and what was his name.
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 12:11 PM by
JA


I think the story is a little plain. It is just about you taking your little brothers band aid off. But its an ok story! Good Job!!
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 11:57 AM by
MM6


I really liked this story, it made me laugh and was very enthusiastic. I think that you could have made the ending longer and added more detail to make the paragraph flow more, but overall it was really good.
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 11:54 AM by
MS6


I like that you love your brother, it is very nice. Mabye a tad bit more detail would be nice but for the most part your a good writer
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 11:53 AM by
EG6


I like that you love your brother, it is very nice. Mabye a tad bit more detail would be nice but for the most part your a good writer
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 11:52 AM by
EG6

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