Article posted September 9, 2011 at 08:09 AM • comment (6) • Reads 1073 • Return to Blog List

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Hi TS! I liked your storybecause it told me what the words "My story is" make you feel. Next time I would write more.
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 12:42 PM by JJ


I loved your story and what you said It looks very good. I think you could add more description
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 11:57 AM by TH


Hey Troy! I loved your story. It was interesting hearing about you. In the third sentence you made a mistake, though. You said I thnk I think you meant think. Just pulling it to your mind, but the story was great not to long and not to short. Loved your story!!! Have a nice day and live to love!
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 11:57 AM by KH 6


I think you did much better than the last time you described it much better than last time. I think you should have read through it again because you messed up a few times.
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 11:53 AM by JW6


Nice story Troy. I love the way you ended the article.Next time could you tell us one of your stories.
Great job Troy.
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 11:50 AM by MH6


Great job TS6! This was a great story. You did awesome writing this. I can tell you worked hard! One thing you could improve on is repeating. You said "I think" a little too much. Otherwise, great job.
Comment Posted on September 13, 2011 at 11:50 AM by TW6