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Greeneyes' Story- Part One
This is an off-hand story that I'm writing. Just an extra thing that'll leave you wanting more to it!
Stumbling into an abandoned hollow is one thing. Stumbling into a fully inhabited hollow is a whole different one. I remember that day when I padded into MapleClan's camp. Here is my story... Injured and weak, I took a look around with my one good eye; the one that wasn't shredded beyond belief. All I could see was dozens of yellow, blue, amber, and green eyes staring at me. 'Crap.' I thought in desperation. I felt someone grab my scruff and I wailed. "Let me go! Let me go!" I demanded in my high kitten voice. The she-cat set me down and looked at me. Her soft blue eyes made me loose all aggression for these new cats. "Little one, quiet." She pressed some cobweb onto my eye and ear, which also had a nick. It stung, but in a good way. I gave a little smile at her. Some other kits walked my way. "Hi," a brown tabby tom chirped. "I'm Hawkkit, this is Adderkit, Emberkit, Crystalkit, and Laurelkit." He said, pointing to each kitten in turn. "What's your name?" He asked. I shook off my own name and gave myself a newer one. "Greenkit," I said randomly, praying that my odd eye- My blue one- was the one closed and I'd have a reason to be called Greenkit. Hawkkit snorted. "No way, you don't have green fur!" I rolled my eyes. "Where are your wings, Hawkboy?" I retorted bitterly. This went on for a bit until Pebblestar, the leader, pulled us apart. One cat in particular liked me. Her name was Larksong. She was a dusty brown tabby she-cat with green eyes. She took me in and raised me. Everything was perfect, for once in my life. My surrogate mother was Dawnlight, and her kits took me in as their own sister. I had never had such fun in my life. Watching from the nursery as Laurelkit and Crystalkit became Crystalpaw and Laurelpaw... Ah, those were the days. A moon passed, and I was four moons old. Adderkit and Emberkit were five moons old. It went smoothly until the foxes came. It was living hell.
You've probably seen some things that you didn't know what they meant. Here's something for future references.
Twolegs: Humans, as what the cats call them
She-cats: A female cat with no kits
Tom: A male cat
Queen: A female cat with kits
Apprentice: A six-moon old cat training to be a warrior
Kit: A cat too young to be an apprentice, also known as a kitten
Warrior: Toms and She-cats without kits
Moon: A month
Clan: A group of cats
Names: An apprentice has 'paw' at the end of their name, a kitten has 'kit' at the end of their name, and a warrior has some feature describing their appearance or personality, such as Greeneyes. She has green eyes
Hope you enjoy!
Article posted September 6, 2011 at 11:23 AM •
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I like it so far Cammy. Great job!
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Hello! My name is Sakura-chan! I got on your blog with a comment that Kacie left on my blog. She said you like Nyan Cat and drawing. I am a writer and would love it if you read my blog! Arigoto!
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