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 The bes thing about 6th Grade One of the best things is that we get more freedom than we ever got in elementary school. Also, lunch is much better that it was in elementary school. I also like having a Mac. It makes homework much better and I feel like it helps me focus better. I also like being in a different class every period. Article posted August 26, 2011 at 08:27 AM • comment (5) • Reads 1119 • Return to Blog List Add a CommentPosted Comments  I like your blog a lot! i agree, we do get a lot more freedom. I think that the mac helps me focus, too, accept when it gets Kernal Panic. i think it could be a distraction to some people, though. they might play games during class. I am glad games have very bright colors, i feel like it keeps me away from the temptation of playing games in class, because the colors will flash on our faces, and then the teacher will know, and get us in trouble. I do not want to get in trouble! i think you did a great job, but i feel like you repeated yourself over and over when you said, "Also,". I noticed that you did spell the title to your thing wrong. (the word best). i think you can edit that, if you'd like.
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ATB 6I like your blog a lot! i agree, we do get a lot more freedom. I think that the mac helps me focus, too, accept when it gets Kernal Panic. i think it could be a distraction to some people, though. they might play games during class. I am glad games have very bright colors, i feel like it keeps me away from the temptation of playing games in class, because the colors will flash on our faces, and then the teacher will know, and get us in trouble. I do not want to get in trouble! i think you did a great job, but i feel like you repeated yourself over and over when you said, "Also,". I noticed that you did spell the title to your thing wrong. (the word best). i think you can edit that, if you'd like.
Comment Posted on August 29, 2011 at 05:37 PM by
ATB 6This was a very good blog! You did a good job of telling the reader what you like about 6th grade. One thing I would change is you said "also" to much. Otherwise, you did a great job!
Comment Posted on August 29, 2011 at 12:51 PM by
TW6I loved your story, you stayed on topic and did a great job! I think you could do better making your sentences more juicy and use more discriptive words.
Comment Posted on August 29, 2011 at 12:48 PM by
THI love your post! It is very good except for that you misspelled the word best in the title, otherwise it was very good.
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