Over my brake I went to my lake house up in Wae Saw Wiskonsin . I went to a place called Granit peak. My dad and I went to a trane park witch is a small mountan with ramp after ramp after ramp ect ... It was the second day that we went to the trane park. I went ZOOOOMING down the mountain. I stopped at the starting mound , about six other people where waiting. Two minutes later it was my turn to go, I went down the mound of snow I hit the ramp up, up ,up and down, down ,down...
I LANDED THE JUMP .
, hit a groove , flue into the air and fell
I guess that's the end
P.S I fell on the ramp twice
now it's the end ... I hope