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My favourite piece of narrative writing this year

Stranded in the sea!


Swish! Smash! There I was, stranded in the sea with huge, rough water Ahh’’! There I was in the middle of the sea, screaming with a huge gulp of sea water in my mouth. I looked like a pelican, with sardines in my mouth.


While I was stranded in sea during night time, I saw the light house’s light flashing in my eye. Trying to swim to land across the ocean, I got cramp and fell straight down the drain. There I was under the sea on the soft sand, under water and crabs crawling over me, my eyes, and mouth


Suddenly little tiny bubbles came out of my mouth. Then it closed. I felt someone grabbing my hand tightly and dragging me across the sand. I heard children playing on surf boards and dads or mums driving the boats with the kids at the back on the biscuits(Like rings) I couldn’t breathe so they rang the hospital the manger of the hospital and the other people put me on the hospital bed. I was in the hospital


Resting and while they put Needles and pins in my back after that horrible things  happened to me I was fine and then they gave me some jelly and some Ice cream after those tasty stuff and Horrifying things in my arms and legs and back I felt fine and Then they called my parents but before they could even ring I told them I didn’t have any. Any way after I told them my story they called theeeeee...... ORPHANGE! I SCREAMED AHHHHHHHHH! What are you doing I said to the manger of the Hospital theirs no way I’m going to the orphanage


 


FEW MINUTES LATER...................


 


Hello! Am I getting adopted yet I said to the people yes! Some one just called your getting adopted wow when tomorrow are they rich yep awesome I m going to school


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