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The Turkey That Escaped On Thanksgiving
Once there was a turkey named Kayleigh. She lived on a ranch in Montana. She also lived with her mom named Merita, but we call her Meri, Her dad named Robert, we call him Bob, and last but not least Evan, but we call him Van.
One day they were all walking in the park and then there were nets all around them and they didn’t know what to do. So they all panicked and tried to escape but didn’t succeed. They thought that biting through the net would work and it did! So they ran away from there… but the people followed them. They went through distant lands and scary woods to get away but they never knew that the people with the nets were right behind them.
Then they thought they were safe to rest but they weren’t, so they rested for a while but… when they woke up they were in a huge factory and didn’t know what to do.
Chapter 2
The factory was so huge the gobbles echoed all around. Then a man picked them up and took them in to a dark room… and that was the end of them.
The End
Article posted November 18, 2010 at 01:45 PM •
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Hi Maya,
I really miss you. Your story about the turkey awsome.
Your friend,
Arabella
Comment Posted on January 30, 2011 at 04:14 PM by
Arabella


Great twists and turns in your turkey story! I thought for sure that Maya was going to save them all! Maybe they should move to Whistler where they don't have Thanksgiving!
Comment Posted on January 12, 2011 at 03:51 PM by
sarah


Wow! Too bad the turkeys got gobbled! Did you eat turkey at Thanksgiving? What did you think?? Great story, thank you for sharing it! Keep writing. Can you post pictures too?
Faith, Meri's friend from fashion design school. I knew her before she was your mom and before she was a turkey!!!
Comment Posted on November 26, 2010 at 11:29 PM by
Faith Davis


I like the descriptive details Maya. I felt like I was really there watching the turkeys run away!
Comment Posted on November 24, 2010 at 09:49 PM by
Bob Patton


I like how you wrote "distant lands and scary woods". I feel bad for those turkeys! Great sad and scary story.
Love, Mama
Comment Posted on November 24, 2010 at 11:43 AM by
Mom

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