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 Three Charms The dog was getting excited about eating the horse and the horse was not worried about getting eaten by the dog because the dog was chained up. (Third person limited omniscient: Thoughts of one character) The dog was jumping over his coop. He thought it would be fun to eat the horse. He thought about his teeth sinking into the horse’s legs. He was so excited he kept jumping over his coop. The horse stood eating hay. (Third person dramatic: Actions and words) The dog was in his coop. When the horse came by he said, "Hey you don’t you wish you could eat me?" The dog said, "If I get this chain broke, I will sink my teeth in you." Article posted November 10, 2010 at 11:42 AM • comment (6) • Reads 856 • Return to Blog List Add a CommentPosted Comments  Must be a Great Dane, if it was a chiwawa I would like to see that dog try to eat that horse!
Comment Posted on December 21, 2010 at 05:04 PM by
ShaniceWow Brandon this is a hungry dog. I like the voices for the animals.
Comment Posted on December 8, 2010 at 07:44 AM by
Dakota BEvil puppy! He should stick with dog food.
Comment Posted on November 23, 2010 at 09:21 AM by
rodgerIf you ask me I think that the dog has high hopes.
Comment Posted on November 23, 2010 at 07:50 AM by
DakotahThat's good. My story is about a leopard and wild beast. That was funny.
Comment Posted on November 22, 2010 at 10:42 AM by
JamesI never knew animals had thoughts.:)
Comment Posted on November 11, 2010 at 03:27 PM by
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