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 The Skater and the BMXer Third person omniscient The bmxer was thinking about eating healthy and the skater was thinking about eating junk food. The bmxer ate healthy and the skater ate junk food. The bmxer did well in all his competitions. The skater didn’t do very well in his competitions. Third person limited omniscient The bmxer was eating healthy. He thought the food tasted like a nice juicy sub. He thought of the days when he was eating junk food. The skater asked the bmxer how he was so skinny and how he was so good at bmxing. Third person dramatic The bmxer stood next to his bike. Tightening the handlebars, the bmxer said, ”Wow this reminds me of when I was a little kid and my dad fixed my bike.” The skater stood on his skateboard and he said, ”You just wait I’m going to beat you at a game of bike.” Article posted November 10, 2010 at 07:50 AM • comment (2) • Reads 2127 • Return to Blog List Add a CommentPosted Comments  I agree with the skater more than the bmxer. Eventhough it would be more smart for the skater to eat healthy.
Comment Posted on November 21, 2011 at 09:22 AM by
Zachery VHey Cory I really liked your blog about the Skater and the BMXer. I think Im more like the BMXer.
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