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We are goig to recomend you some plces for your next holidays in spain.
Mallorca: we wants to is beautiful islan because it has some beautiful beaches.
Ibiza: we wants to ofert he beautiful island because it was some beches we precious girlds in it .
San Sebastian: We wants the ofer this city because the food is very good.
The New Camp : We wants to go ofer this camp because it has a very good team of football.
Marc, Aitor, Joan, Miquel (2nd ESO D)
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Hello, my name is Cailyn. Thank you for all the suggestions you left, they will be very useful. You did a good job on your english. Good bye!
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 01:24 PM by
cailyn w


hello how are you guys!!!!!!!! :)
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 01:23 PM by
roberto


Hello, how are you guys from Spain doing?
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 01:22 PM by
Nicolas


hola,
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 01:22 PM by
nico


Hi, To make your english sound better, I wouldn't always sound out what the word sounds like because a lot of words in the english don't sound like how they sound. You are doing really well though for just starting a week or so ago!
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 01:18 PM by
Emma M 7th Bell


Hey,
My name is anthony I live in Ohio, and I
am 15 years old. I love football but the American kind.Sorry but I dont like soccer. I bet speaking english is hard as tryin to speak spanish. Well hope you guys have a good year and, maybe we will speak again soon
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 01:15 PM by
Anthony p. 7th bell


Hi Good job on your english. Something you could change is instead of We wants, you could put we want to ofer.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 01:15 PM by
Alison P 7th bell


I am confused. Why do you keep saying ofer.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 01:15 PM by
haley h. 7th bell


hello,good job on writting in english. one thing you could change is to say i want to.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 01:13 PM by
delaney b 7th bell


Hi everyone. You all have done a great job in writing in english. There is one thing that you could change is when you say "we wants" you should say "I want to." That is the one thing you should change but other than that you all did great!!
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 01:12 PM by
Taylor period: 7


Thank you for telling us where some places to go to.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 01:12 PM by
Alex and Ryan bell 7


Hello, this is Alyssa Mariah. We were wondering what you meant by the sentence "we wants to ofert he beautiful island because it was some beches we precious girlds in it .
" Your english is very good by the way. San sebastian and Mallorca sound like interesting places to go. Is it very hot there, and what types of spanish do they speak?
Alyssa and Mariah, 3rd period spanish
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 08:41 AM by
Alyssa B and Mariah C


Your english is good, but you are foregetting some letters in a few of your words.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 08:35 AM by
Molly K. period 3


Your English is pretty good, there were some mistakes, so let me point them out for you. You said islan instead of island. Also you said beches when it is beaches. Girlds is spelled girls, and ofer is spelled offer. Other than that you did very well in this blog!
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 08:34 AM by
Trevor N. 3rd


Hello, this is Alyssa Mariah. We were wondering what you meant by the sentence "we wants to ofert he beautiful island because it was some beches we precious girlds in it .
" Your english is very good by the way. San sebastian and Mallorca sound like interesting places to go. Is it very hot there, and what types of spanish do they speak?
Alyssa and Mariah, 3rd period spanish
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 08:33 AM by
Alyssa B and Mariah C


You all are doing very well on your English. Don't forget to use are's. I'm excited to talk to you over blog. :P
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 08:31 AM by
Nicole M. 3rd


Your English is very good. Thank you for the recomendations! It really helped with my project.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 08:31 AM by
Bailey O. 3rd Bell


when you say you want something, it's I WANT, not I WANTS
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 08:29 AM by
Adam R.


Looks like your catching on to English fast. Keep up the hard work!
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:49 AM by
Luke K 2nd Bell


i'm not sure what this sentence means "we wants to is beautiful islan because it has some beautiful beaches"
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:49 AM by
ryan l. 2nd period


Hi, thanks for posting places you like in Spain. I like Florida cause of the beach.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:47 AM by
MollyB2


Hi ! I'm Jessica I play soccer, the beautiful beaches sound like fun. I wish that I could visit there. I'm sure your beaches are much prettier than the ones around Ohio.What kind of football do you guys play ?
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:46 AM by
Jessica W.


Greetings from Ohio. Spain Sounds very fun and interesting. Keep up the good work on your English it is comming along very well.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:45 AM by
Drew D. 2nd bell


I am deeple impressed with your English skills. I wish i was as a good of a speaker in spanish as you are in English.
If you ever come to America we are found of football (or soccer as we call it here) and you would enjoy it.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:43 AM by
Kyle


hi your english is coming out really well
my spanish is not good at all you do not wana here it
its true
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:42 AM by
austin b 2nd bell


Your english is getting really good. I know you are working hard to speak english really well. Keep up the good work
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:42 AM by
Jessie A 2nd bell


Hello. Greetings from Ohio U.S.A. Spain sounds like a very interesting place to visit. Have a good day!
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:42 AM by
Luke G 2nd bell


You are doing very well with your English. Keep up the good work! I hope to visit Spain sometime soon.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:41 AM by
Courtney B 2nd bell


Thanks for sharing lots of places you enjoy in Spain!
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:39 AM by
Brianna C. 2nd Bell


gracias ! (: hola !
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:39 AM by
Natasha C. 2nd bell


hey there,
Thank you for recommending the places you did. I want to researchhe 5 best regions of Spain. I want to know about geography and theri cultural norms. I like sports very much and would like to know more about this football they play. Im very interested in the certain foods that are made and eaten in certain regions as well. Im very fond of islands and beautiful. I will look into these certain regions.
Thank you,
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:07 AM by
TRistan C. 1


Hi my name is Andrew, thanks for posting about good places in Spain. It helped me a lot. The football you mentioned. Is that like what we call soccer, or regular American Football? Thanks for posting.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:06 AM by
Andrew F. 1st


In the first sentence, places is spelled p-l-a-c-e-s. I like the way you described the beaches as beautiful in the second sentence, but I'm not sure what you are trying to say, "We wants to is beautiful islan because it has some beautiful beaches." and also in the third sentence, " We wants to ofert he neautiful island beacuse it was some beches we precious girlds in it.". Other than that, your English was very good. Keep trying and don't give up! :)
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:05 AM by
briannah H. 1


It sounds like spain is a beautiful pace. Thank you for your information. It was very helpful.
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:01 AM by
Erikka s. 1st bell


You are very coming along with your English...Good job!
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 07:01 AM by
Courtney B, 1st


You are really coming along with your English! Do you have anymore information about your favorite cites or countries in Spain?
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 06:59 AM by
Jamie C bell 1


You are really coming along with your English! Do you have anymore information about your favorite cites or countries in Spain?
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 06:59 AM by
Jamie C bell 1


I really like the way you and your friends are using the verbs and trying to explain and describe the places. I want to come and visite the places you speak about. When you use the word want, We is singular so make sure you do not put the s after want. It is called subject-verb agreement. Thank you for bloging!
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 06:58 AM by
Kellsa


What information do you know about Galicia?
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 06:57 AM by
Courtney B.


You are really coming along with your English! Do you have anymore information about your favorite cities or countries in Spain?
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 06:57 AM by
Jamie C


You have very good information for some cities in spain! lol
Comment Posted on September 22, 2010 at 06:55 AM by
Courtney B.

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