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An old, dirty Victorian hall is up for sale, the sign has been standing on the un-mowed, overgrown lawn for about a month in Wellington.
No one knows, but it has a ‘staff’ of spooky white ghosts including a scary and fat, tall and cut butler and lots of other tall servants.
It sucks but the frightening white ghosts the colour of clouds moving through the sky on a warm cloudy day, can’t leave the mouldy hall that has cobwebs everywhere.
It is very important to them that they like the new owners wether there young or old because if they don’t like them it will be hard for the owners. If they have to share ‘their’ dirty mouldy hall, they feel they should have a say in who moves in.
One day a series of weird and scared, frightened and terrified people visited the abandon rusty hall to see if they want to buy it.
First a strange big family come, but the misty white ghosts make the whole family all become petrified horrified and terrified so they get frightened off. Next a angry mean head teacher comes in and the white ghosts frighten him off in a different way. It was getting later and just as they were about to close for the night an old couple come in they went a long way until they saw the white ghosts that looked black at night.
Finally a nice young couple visits the ugly red hall. The white see-throw ghosts try and try, but they are not afraid of anything the misty white ghosts do. Eventually they make friends with the see-throw misty ghosts.
The nice young couple buy the dirty and ugly, mouldy and rusty hall. They decided to buy the hall so they could make it become an old mansion. The white misty ghosts take on their old jobs and help the nice young couple to live happily in their new home. One month later their old and rusty, dirty and mouldy house becomes a beautiful mansion in the grassy and huge countryside.
Article posted July 25, 2010 at 04:52 PM •
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Hi I'm Isla and I am 11 years old. I am very good at sport and I am also a very rapid runner. I won three gold medals at Porritt Stadium in Hamilton. There were 26 clubs competing. I won long jump, 200m and 100m. My favourite animal is the Cheetah because of it's long muscular body and the speed it can run.They have interminable sharp teeth to tear apart their prey. My favourite colour is green because it is the colour of nature.