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Girls in the Attic
“Ruby, do you want to come to my house?” asked Tyler.
“Sure, I’d love to. How’s this weekend?” Ruby asked.
“Perfecto,” Tyler giggled. “You can come for the night if you want to.”
“Okay,” Ruby said.
Ruby is a beautiful girl who lives on Tie Street. She has golden hair and sparkling emerald eyes. She is sweet and polite. As for Tyler she had gleaming sky blue eyes and shiny brown hair. Tyler is the same as Ruby, sweet and polite.
As the days went by it became Saturday and is the day Ruby goes to Tyler’s house. Tyler’s house is yellow with a grey door. It has a red roof and an orange chimney.
“I’m so excited Ruby said to Tyler as Tyler’s Mum drove them to the house.
“Shall we play in the attic?” Tyler asked Ruby.
“Sure ...” Ruby said, but she got cut off by Tyler’s mum.
“But you girls shouldn’t go in there today because I’m cleaning the attic today.”
“Okay,” said Tyler. “We’ll just play in there tomorrow, right Ruby?”
When they got home they played in Tyler’s room for ages.
“Dinner time girls,” Tyler’s mum said loudly, so the girls could hear.
“Okay Mum we’re coming!” Tyler yelled.
“What kind of pizza is it? It’s very nice,” Ruby whispered.
“It’s Mum’s special combo pizza,” Tyler whispered back.
“Oh,” said Ruby softly.
“Should we go to bed Ruby?” Tyler asked.
“Oh that’s what I was going to say.”
“So let’s go then.”
“Shall we go to the attic Tyler?”
“Yes, let’s go Ruby.”
So the girls climbed up the stairs and up the ladder until they got to the attic. They closed the trap door and had a look around.
“Wow, check this out Ruby,” Tyler said.
“What is it?” Ruby asked.
“It’s an old porcelain cat,” Tyler answered.
“It’s so cute.”
“We should leave Tyler.”
“Yeah, let’s go.”
They went to the trap door and tried to open it but it didn’t budge. They tried again and again but nothing happened.
“Girl’s get up. I thought you wanted to go to the attic!” Tyler’s Mum shouted.
The girls got up and they both realised they had been dreaming about the porcelain cat and getting trapped in the attic.
“I don’t want to go there anymore. How about you?” Tyler asked Ruby.
“No thanks. I don’t want to take the risk of getting trapped.”
Article posted July 20, 2010 at 03:45 PM •
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You wrote an interesting and detailed story using the picture as your starting point. Well done Fyfe.
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