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Poem - The Abandoned City
I walked alone,
Studying the gray sky,
When I came across,
An abandoned city.
I searched for a city name,
And I found a sign.
The sign was charred,
And under some dust,
Written under the words,
Were the words,
'Was Abandoned When You Gave Up'
Article posted March 16, 2010 at 03:15 PM •
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Good Poem i liked the "Was Abandoned When You Gave Up"
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Wow! Nice poem!
Comment Posted on April 2, 2010 at 12:32 PM by
I like the flow of this poem. There is real truth to your words
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