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Poem - The Abandoned City
I walked alone,
Studying the gray sky,
When I came across,
An abandoned city.
I searched for a city name,
And I found a sign.
It said,
'Hope City'.
The sign was charred,
And under some dust,
Written under the words,
'Hope City',
Were the words,
'Was Abandoned When You Gave Up'
Article posted March 16, 2010 at 03:15 PM •
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Good Poem i liked the "Was Abandoned When You Gave Up"
Comment Posted on July 21, 2010 at 09:32 PM by
EL


Thanks.
Comment Posted on April 26, 2010 at 01:01 PM by
JM


Wow! Nice poem!
Comment Posted on April 2, 2010 at 12:32 PM by
ED


I like the flow of this poem. There is real truth to your words
Comment Posted on March 20, 2010 at 02:05 PM by
Mr. M

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