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My 4th Version of FLOWERS
Flowers are pretty like a delicate Spring Song
They sprout as if they were a turtle
They grow like little weeds with pedals
I think flowers have a little world
And when it rains the clouds are
Like a wild sprinkler in the sky
Also they talk by smelling different
They smell like happiness, sadness, existent, and more
Well if it won’t rain than that problem
I wish it would rain from head to bottom
Please have it rain oh I’m tired of sun
All I want is to have is to have some fun!
The flowers they’ll freeze
When cold winter breeze, fills the air
No one will see them outside
But yet they will come and be so pretty
Come spring again the flowers will sprout
Everyone will scream and shout
FOR FLOWERS they are here!!!!
Article posted March 2, 2010 at 07:01 PM •
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ER, You have a lot of great ideas in your poem. Your word choice is strong and has moments of brilliance. I love "they smell like happiness, sadness, existence and more and like a wild sprinkler in the sky.
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