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Creature In the Ocean
A creature of light,
Flying past me in the blue,
A creature of freedom.
Article posted January 29, 2010 at 01:42 PM •
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I like your poem. I like the creature of light. It does seem as if it may be moving and alive. Nice job.
Comment Posted on March 11, 2010 at 09:20 AM by
I really enjoyed that poem because while I was reading, I had a beautiful picture in my head of a clear, deep blue ocean with a sparkling light shining in it.
Comment Posted on March 3, 2010 at 11:29 AM by
I like your poem because I can imagine all of that stuff like the wind blowing on my face.
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