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Is Cole Ok?
I agree with Garvey, I don’t think Cole is ok because his been badly injured by the Spirit Bear. Cole has a broken bone, his ribs is broken, he doesn’t have that much energy, and his having a hard time to move both of his hands. Cole is not also himself. If you’re OK you should be your self, you’re not in a hospital, none of your bones are broken, you feel OK, and you feel no pain. If Garvey didn’t come to the island and didn’t see Cole, Cole would probably die.
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It's really good but you should really tell us more and get us a little more interested by telling us about the book cause what if someone doesn't know what book you are talking about.
Comment Posted on March 30, 2010 at 12:02 PM by
Louise
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